ASSUMED by MHR Geer - Spotlight, Excerpt, Interview & Giveaway
A constant stream of
jubilant holiday-goers jostled my suitcase as I paced the arrivals gate, but
Sandy’s mobile went to voicemail a fourth time. I hung up without leaving another message
and strolled past the baggage carousel. Again.
“Where are you, Sandy?”
I muttered under my breath.
A man in a white Panama
hat vacated a bench, and I collapsed onto the cold metal and hugged the handle
of my suitcase. The other passengers exchanged greetings and gathered their
baggage, and the automatic door slid open with a swoosh to receive them. Every
time the door opened, humid air blasted my face.
The man in the white hat
reappeared but saw me and turned away, presumably to find a bench without a
slouching, scowling American. I raised my shoulders from a slump and crossed my
legs.
“What now, Anne?” I
asked myself, tapping the screen of my phone and resisting the urge to check
the time.
A young boy, about five
years old, wandered over and climbed onto the bench next to me. We exchanged
nervous smiles. Couples and families regrouped near the door, and I watched
their faces, expecting someone to claim the boy, but the door opened and
closed, over and over, and he remained.
I was just about to ask
where the boy’s parents were when a tall woman entered and rushed toward us,
shouting in French. Her profile was dark against the bright sunlight outside,
and her long hair swirled in the vortex of the doorway. The boy pressed against
me, and I almost wrapped my arm around him, but the door closed, and she
smoothed her hair back into place.
She pulled the boy from
the bench, gripping his arms with long, slender fingers. I couldn’t understand
her words, but her reprimand was clear. Her green eyes flashed with fear and
anger. She blamed me for his disappearance. I shrugged, trying to remember how
to apologize in French. Je suis desole?
But I was unsure of the words, so I didn’t say anything, and she didn’t wait
for my explanation.
He left with her, his
little hand firmly inside hers, and when the door opened and whipped her hair
back into the air, the boy turned back to me with a smile. I waved.
And then I was alone
again.
I jumped when my phone
buzzed.
Sorry, Sandy texted. Can’t make
it. Take a taxi to 16 Rue de l’Aile Perdue.
I stared at the text and
considered purchasing a ticket for a return flight, but my phone buzzed again
with a second text.
Please, Anne.
I squared my shoulders
and pulled on my sunglasses. Then I walked through the whoosh of the doorway
and into the sunlight.
The taxi line had
already thinned; it took only a few minutes before a lively man ushered me into
the back of a bright green sedan. The driver offered a brusque “Welcome to Saint
Martin,” and turned up her radio. Taxi code for no talking. Fine with me.
We sped through narrow
streets, dangerously close to sunburned tourists wandering street markets.
Stalls spilled out from under a rainbow of awnings, hawking loud shirts and
oversized beach towels. The air was thick with cardamom and curry, mixed with
the yeasty smell of a patisserie. My stomach rumbled. In my rush to make the
early morning flight, I’d skipped breakfast.
We left town and
traveled up and down winding roads that cut into the hillsides. The villas grew
larger and farther apart and then disappeared into thick foliage behind
security gates. I caught occasional glimpses of dirt lanes and even fewer paved
driveways. When the driver pulled off the road, I leaned out the window to
watch the tops of towering palm trees lining a long gravel driveway. We stopped
on a cobbled motor court in front of a massive house.
I stared up at the
imposing facade from within the safety of the taxi before I bravely stepped
into the blazing sun. I thought there must be some mistake, but before I could
say anything, the taxi drove away. Why had Sandy sent me to a dismal mansion
and not to one of the dazzling resorts I’d passed?
Beyond the house, the
sea stretched to the horizon. Sunlight reflected off the water, awakening
childhood fantasies of pirate ships and mermaid tails. But the hot sun quickly
melted the daydream, and I retreated into the shadow of the mansion.
Up close, the house was
shabby and weather-beaten. Peeling gray paint revealed a history of more
colorful choices. The porch railing leaned at a precarious angle, and as I
cautiously climbed the rotting steps, the wood complained but held, and I
reached the front door and knocked. The sound echoed within the house, but only
silence followed. I knocked again, louder, and waited. Nothing.
“Now what?” I asked the
house.
The house ignored me,
but a piece of paper stuck between two floorboards fluttered in the ocean
breeze. I stepped over and picked it up. She’d left a note—an inconsiderate
welcome, even for Sandy. I exhaled loudly and unfolded the scrap of paper.
MHR shared some of her thoughts with us
I am
not a puppet master
The pandemic taught us surprising things. Some people tried new hobbies. Some people baked bread. All of us learned to respect teachers. Some of us had to get creative to entertain our children. Early in the pandemic, I decided to make sock puppets. We were all taking long, boring walks just to get out of the house, and I thought it might be exciting for the neighbors to enjoy a pop-up puppet theater in my driveway.
I pulled out my sewing machine and gathered fabric scraps and felt scraps and my googly eye collection and got to work. In only an hour, I’d made a few puppets. But then I ran into an issue. I didn’t have a theater. I popped my head out the door to the garage where my husband had been tinkering on something or other and said, “Can you build me a puppet theater?”
His response was typical of his magical-unicorn-husband status. “Sure,” he answered, as easily as if I’d asked him to take out the trash. I closed the door and went back to sewing. Another hour passed while I made two more puppets. Then the door to the garage opened, and my husband asked, “Is this what you had in mind?”
In an hour, he’d built a puppet theater. It was just over four feet long, with 30 inch sides. The particle board frame was one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever seen, and my love for him grew. He painted the frame light gray while I found a discarded curtain rod and ornate black finials, and I fashioned curtains from some old red velvet curtains. (Don’t judge me for having velvet curtains on hand. We all make bad choices sometimes.)
When it was finished, we took turns putting on puppet shows. To be honest, I took more turns than anyone else. The kids humored me and played puppets occasionally, but their excitement didn’t live up to my expectations.
One of the reasons I like putting on a puppet show is that I enjoy telling stories. When the pandemic hit, I’d already finished one draft of a novel, and I was working on a rewrite. Back then I had a few ridiculous ideas of what it meant to be a writer. I was wrong about so many things, but the thing I got really, really wrong was the idea that I had control over my characters’ choices.
Initially, my characters made a lot of inappropriate decisions. For example, I wrote a short story about a woman that lost her partner during escrow on a house that she never wanted. It was her partner’s dream to restore the massive house, but in my story, the grieving widow moved into the house anyway. One of the critiques of my story pointed out that the woman was strong-willed and determined and asked, “Why would she move in if she hated it?” The entire story fell flat because I’d forced her into a decision she never would have made. Her character would have put that house back on the market and sold it–even at a loss.
The story wasn’t salvageable. I’d written beautiful imagery of the dilapidated house and described the grouchy, middle-aged woman perfectly, but the story didn’t make any sense. It was a hard lesson and a turning point in my writing journey. I learned that as a writer, I am not a puppet master.
Well developed characters have backstories that drive their decision making process. They have desires and fears. Just like all of us, they are defined by their experiences. Even though I’m the one telling their stories, I cannot make them do whatever I want. In the case of the grieving widow in the rotting house, I had to move her into a two bedroom condo with a restrictive HOA. She was much happier there, but her story was quite dull.
Now that I’ve learned this lesson I ask myself quite often, “What would [insert name here] do?” The protagonist in my novel ASSUMED is a naive, sheltered woman named Anne. She’s too trusting because everyone in her small life has treated her fairly, older men unconsciously remind her of her father, and she’s lonely. These factors drive Anne’s decisions, and some of her choices are not very smart. Throughout the story, she learns about betrayal, and we see how this affects her future choices. I find this process fascinating.
Learning enough about your characters to determine exactly how they will react in every situation can also be very time consuming and frustrating, but when my characters won’t do what I tell them, I can always crouch inside the puppet theater and put on a show for my neighbors without worrying about any troublesome backstory.
MHR Geer was born in California but raised in the Mid-West. After studying Physics at the University of California, Santa Barbara, she started a bookkeeping business.
MHR enjoys reading suspense and is always delighted with an unexpected twist.
ASSUMED is her debut novel. She lives in Ventura, CA with her two sons and her unicorn husband (because he’s a magical creature.)
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